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I really enjoyed this game, but there are some issues I take with the story. Why Elaine went missing is very vague and there seems to be more pieces to her story that kind of leaves the ending falling flat. Such as with J and Mr O (I wanna censor their names in case this could somehow spoil something). Like what was happening there?? Why did she borrow money and what's going on with her abusive father. I guess you could answer this by making another short game from Elaine's perspective. Other than that, it was really good. I love the keyword element and the setting, particularly in the bakery. Your writing style and the way you make rpgs is very nice. Thank you for making this short story.