I think the art style and tone are excellent and really compelling reasons to spend more time exploring the world and story.
I thought the writing was good but could potentially use a little polish and enrichment, aiming to create the feeling like these are very specific people with rich personalities and histories. Citizen Sleeper was a game that I thought did this incredibly well, though it may be too text-heavy a comparison for your game.
I also think the game could benefit a lot from a bit more sound work, especially during cutscenes. The visuals are so cool and really deserve some sound design to enhance them. I'd also be curious to see a bit more gameplay or puzzles, though I know this is just a short demo.
Overall I'm very excited to see where things go with Riley, Metamo, and Slushie. Great work!
The info in your first link worked! I used The Unarchiver to open the zip, then had to move "Game.app" into a new folder, then it worked. Thanks a lot for looking into it for me. I can rarely get games in the RPGM community to work on my computer, so I'm very excited to dive into your demo.
Hey, I’ve been following the development and wanted to say congrats on getting the demo out! I have a mac and wasn’t able to run the demo. I’m guessing it’s because the demo isn’t 64-bit, but just wanted to check if you know if that’s the case? (Don’t worry, with this computer, I’m used to it.)
