very promising start, though there are a few mistakes here and there. (which character said what messes up sometimes, showing the wrong person(s name) talking)
It's alright; reminds me of lady thunder a bit (that one however doesnt have the "sound/metronom", at least not the version i had played)
theres one thing that bothers me - there is no "climax" to it.
if you wanna go full on denial, at least give an option to turn that off, maybe add edging too? Letting someone "customize" their experience might be hard to implement, but i'd say worth it (again, lady thunder does allow to turn options on and off etc. (i'd play it to get a sense for that type of thing))
I did honestly expect her to be like "now cum for me etc." but nope. just tease - which will turn people off - so they go play something else (or watch something else) to get off - might not be good for "player retention" other than that, dialogue is ok, model looks nice.
