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I think this is the great start. I cant seem to get back up after falling, but otherwise the controls are actually quite nice to use.

Maybe some more objects/background hints, or maybe talking npc characters would make the story more clear.

The visuals are so wonderful for this story!

I love the slow setup, as well as being able to dictate the diary entries. While the end is unfinished I think this is great, and I still enjoyed how it played out.

I love how much is conveyed with so little context. This is a story that's very easy to get lost in, and I feel like I want to see even more of the universe. I love how much decisions matter.

The art is also lovely, I love how the most gruesome thing that happens is seen completely from the outside leaving it to your imagination.

This was so fun!

First off, the art style is wonderful.

Second, the characters are very fun. it was interesting seeing everyone and trying to reason who would be the murderer.

Once I found them, I was highly invested in the story of how it happened.

This was so charming, both in concept and execution.

I love how the descriptions of things sound like descriptions an actual cat would use, like referring to a tangle of circuitry as something that would "make a ball of yarn proud".

I also like how concise the reading segments were, it felt very engaging.

The writing is incredibly strong here. The descriptions of dreams fit so well, it really does feel like how dreams are in real life. 

Using dreams as a way to explore someone's psyche and lived experience is something I really like here, and I think this concept is done specifically when in this game. I love the way the beginning foreshadows the later revelations.

The music and color choice is also very strong.

Fantastic job!

This was incredibly charming, I love all the details and how many areas there are.
I was a bit lost and confused when it came to objectives, but I was able to get accustomed to the characters and what their roles were!

Love the goofiness of it (especially after seeing the initial pitch).

Being able to actually move around the space was a great little piece of interactivity.  There were some glitches and typos here and there, but I could still tell what was going on.

I loved the little details in the game, things like being able to try to do homework, and I also loved the cutscene of the monster revealing itself.

I found this story very interesting.  I ended up seeing a god in my dreams and later on, tried my best to help people in a tough situation by writing words. The word writing situation was wonderful, I really felt like my words made both a physical difference as well as a symbolic one.

The writing in this was clear and colorful, I especially liked the line "you do not get to choose who dines with Death."

This game (as well as the page) has a wonderful atmosphere.

The themes are concise and interesting, and I enjoy the characterization of Ella as a being that isn't evil but instead indifferent.

The music and drawings are also fantastic and add to the feeling of dread.

I love the mystery and the empty feeling the town has. Is this incomplete on its own or will there be another installment? I'm excited!

This was incredibly engaging, I was very invested in making the correct decisions. I spent a lot of time thinking on the risks and advantages of certain choices, and thankfully my tribe survived the winter!

This game was incredibly atmospheric, I got very invested. There is a lot going on that drew me in, all the mysteries and different options made me want to keep exploring. Fantastic job!

I explored the house and was able to do some silly puzzles with chairs! 

This game was very cute, I love being able to explore the environment.

I got the death ending after seeing a mermaid statue come from a room and spot me.

The setting and name work very well. The imagery of the mermaid statues is great, it's very creepy to think about.

I played as Ravencaller, and was incinerated by the Guardian after answering the riddle wrong.

I liked the setting and puzzle mechanics, and the riddle poem was very tricky and interesting to think about.

I flirted with the entity and died with 0 rizz.

I liked this, it was funny but still a scary concept. I like the inclusion of doing everyday tasks like homework and struggling with art block.