Man, ive played a few of these renpy games and most of the time you get either one of the two (good animation or good writing but you managed to combine both in a stellar way.
I really like your way of writing the story&girls, each has their own vibe which is nicely portrayed and the animations (porn ones and general slice-of-life ones) are fun and kinetic.
Im really looking forward and will be coming back to this one when its further along :)
GJ buddy