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Thank YOU for your great work! And for asking me for more information. I really love The Builder (especially Synne). Keep up the great work!

Looking at the scene now, in relationship to how young Rob looks, the doll looks similar to how I imagine a child might look like in Fjorda. The doll blinks it's eyes (as if it's alive). So when the scene cuts from Rob describing how his dad destroys the doll, to the scene with the broken doll in the trash - it's horrifying because it looks like a mutilated child - who is gasping for breath.  Things to consider:
1. Can you make the doll look less realistic and more toy-like? For example, many children's dolls do not have developed breasts. Maybe the skin texture is more porcelain or wood-like (which I think the original was). 
 2. If the doll's joints were more doll like -(gaps where the shoulders and elbows articulate) you could maybe show the limbs "akimbo" and see the thread/band that connects the elbow or shoulder joint. So the doll parts in the dust bin look less like a mutilated child and more like a broken toy.
3. Some dolls cry. With your current animation, you could change the script from how life like the doll breathed, to how life-like it's eye's blinked and cried. I notice the doll in the story blinking, but not the rise/fall of it's chest. Add tears to the animation, and in the trash can scene replace the gasping face with a tear-stained crying face and it might be just as moving, and less creepy. 
Hope this feedback helps!!

Love the game! Keep up the great work. Just FYI, the revisisons to the doll scene are just creepy. I enjoyed the original scene much more and without getting the ick. 

Thank you very much! I really enjoyed your game and lok forward to the updates. 

When the MC finds the hidden camera, would you kindly consider putting up a warning about domestic violence and suicide content? 

I was really enjoying your VN and then WHAM! I realize it says above, "...you'll confront the traumas of your past...." Because of my past, I'd like to have a choice before I view this type of content. 

Thanks for your time and consideration. 

Not sure what it would entail on the developer side, however when the MC has sex with a fairy or a demon character,  their wings should be out and part of the lewd scene.

I'm a HUGE fan of this AVN and am really looking forward to playing Chapter 2!!

Downloaded the Mac Version.
After the tutorial, when exploring the city, I encounter an error where the screen turns orange and the game doesn't respond to any controls. It looked like a cool game though. 

I have a Mac. Downloaded the iOS version of the .rar file. Downloaded an app to extract the .rar file. And when I try to upen the exracted file, it say “this is not an app.” Hope the $2 helps you make a version for the Mac that works.