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Great game, but more on to it is the soundtrack, that makes everything feel alive (aside for the basic H-scene soundtrack) this story has great potential, from the story writing to the world you've built.

However i'm surprised to see that even if the MC is a ""new person" he doesn't seem to form a persona, if anything he feels pretty robotic in the way he acts and talks, as i understood about him he chose this path in the end but how come he doesnt have a flair if not through the decisions we make or will make, through the story.

Also on a more personal sidenote, would love to see Hatsumi scenes or as a potential romanceable character! love character alot but as i said its more a personal hope. And it would be really dope to see some more on the Boss expanding his Troupe, getting close to them earning their loyalty. 

All in all i can't wait to see more on how the story unfolds, as a matter of fact im also considering becoming a Patreon to support this, it's simply way to good! came here for the premise (aka you being a demon lord)  stayed for the amazing story that showed and didn't expect!

Keep at it, part of me hopes that Hatsumi becomes a romanceable character but hey a fan can dream! , and lots of love bro!

Thank you so much! , even though the game wasnt as long, the story was something else, it captured my attention so well that WITH the very well placement of music it made it feel like I was watching an anime/movie.

The story-telling is top notch. It made me slowly get closer to the characters as the player/reader , although i would say that everything went a bit too fast towards the end ( not the fight itself ) but rather that it would have been interesting to see some character development in-between the "two parties" with the possibility for the old adventuring cleric (from the start) seeing the man ( and possibly having PTSD ) , also learning more about Wes and possibly his abilities strenghts weaknesses , having some sprinkles of drama into it but hey, this are simply wishes from a romance/drama lover and the way you made this story really mesmerised me!

It is not a necessity for it perse if anything i hope mabye i helped you a bit in this feedback , or not , i only wish to be able to give a constructive feedback that may help you in the future since i wish to see this fully completed!

I can't wait to see what you will cook for us in the future, I surely will become a patreon to help you anyway i can. Keep at it bro!

This game, is a gem. I love this perspective, rather than being an adventurer you are working for the BBG. Fresh as hell.

Keep on the good work i cant wait to see more of this, ill be watching closely for updates! and ill even consider becoming a patreon!

But for the love of Dahc Buba, THE SOUNDTRACKS ARE REALLY CRAZY!, Please bro, weather you made them, or took them, there must be a way for me to listen to them! , they are too good, being as passionate about music as I am, I cannot stand the idea of not being able to listen to this songs on road, gym, or just chilling. Hopefully you can bring this to light!

Lots of love! and keep at it, I don't believe, I know that if you finish this game it will become a masterpiece! 

A shame, however i will be expecting what you promised! , that was merely a suggestion , besides the headpats i needed more ways to replay it :)

However I wont lose hope, i will be awaiting the next huge update and see how it went, and as i said about how i feel on how this game will become, i am fully conviced that after you drop that update, I will become your Patreon.

If anything I am more sad that i didnt get the chance to find this hidden gem earlier so i could join the Exclusive Memberships Patreon, but hell that didnt stop jimmy to karate chop a dryad, so why would it stop me? :)

That is what I was Really hoping to hear! can't wait to see how the story evolves and I cant wait to see those decisions and sacrifices he will have to do! 

And i hope that mabye the Player will decide ( as in mabye 2 or 3 decisions that change the outcome ) mainly because it will give a nice replayability feel to it! 

However you choose i support it ! i hope that in time i can relay usefull feedback on the story so that I can mabye inspire you or give some ideas on the story, cuz i am a damn sucker for good drama/romance and character/world building.

Lots of love!

I want to say WoW, just wow, first time i played this game and i feel that this might become something amazing, I am fully in love with how you did everything.

 You are literally immersed into the world, like for me a good story doesnt exclude H scenes, it simply makes it more real, meaningful. After several hours of gameplay Komisari, i am literaly following and giving this game a 5 star rating.

For me atleast, i dig drama, like alot. But for me to be fully immersed into dramatic situations ( this is subjective but mabye it  might give you some ideas ) , Lore is what makes the dramatic moments really hit, background stories of the characters and how we interact with them.

The comedy is top notch ''  :) ''  nothing more, came for chicks stayed for Jimmy.

One thing i would really hope to see is a more impactful character development as in the story and the events that happen weather H or Drama moments, to even changes in the world itself. ( yes for an H game it sounds like im turning it into something else, but i got so into it that i am really imagining it how it would turn out with those extra plots )

Oh and last but not least, im curious if the Hero will eventualy grow stronger ( not like the heroins but more like hey ya aint a farmer anymore time to git gud n get some gainz with Jimmy ) 

I want to see how well this evolves because i am already really invested into seeing how the story goes and i hope that this will become a finished product with who knows mabye sequels, and I am heavily considering becoming a patreon to you. 

Keep at it bro, whichever road you will take for the game, i believe that it will turn out fucking great! Lots of love!

P.S.  In my head-cannon, Jimmy speaks in a muffled voice kinda like Pyro from TF2, idk why I just find it funny.

Amazing, i can't wait to see how this game will develop, the settings are amazing, the idea behind it is really damn well made. I'll be following you from today forth Gentle Troll :D

Since it's in alpha stage, I hope that we may get the opportunity to experiment with the drinks, for example creating a good drink by mistake (as in an actual drink and then adding it to the book) or even a wrong one which may influence the adventurers in any way. Hell I'd even add a personality change while under the influence of the magic potions ,which can bring comic interactions or even results in quests, for an instance how in the tutorial when the bartender talked with Fable to add some "spice" in her life, why not add something that can influence their behaviour. This is just an idea, hope the development will be a success! had a lot of fun and I am considering buying the game once it comes out!

Keep at it Gentle Troll!