Going through Ranzo's Chapter 2 story has been a great experience, and Griff's route was even more amazing to me. Excellent work on everything so far! I especially love the music you created; they are absolute masterpieces, no exaggeration.
By the way, I found out there might be some minor bugs in the script:
*SPOILERS*
- Chapter 1 -
If Riley chose to hang out with someone in Wheelhouse on the first day, then when meeting with Griff later by the end of the day, there are options asking if Riley is going to stick with his choice or change his plans.
For example, if promised Ranzo to visit his mum, then the options will be:
- "Change Plans"
- "Stick with Ranzo"
Choosing "Stick with Ranzo" is fine, but if you choose "Change Plans," some repetitive conversation will happen twice.
Here is the dialogue history:
...
Riley: Ahh... Ranzo just got back and I promised I'd do some things with him, but maybe I could move something-
Griff: Hey, don't go cancelling any plans for the likes of me! I'm here 'til after the festival.
Riley (inner voice): He doesn't want to arrange anything.
"Change Plans"
Riley: It's really okay! It was a last-minute plan anyway.
Griff: Well, if it's no problem...
Griff: How about we do tomorrow by the harbour at ten?
Riley (inner voice): I would love that more than anything.
Riley: I'd like that.
Griff: It's set, then!
Riley: I'm free tomorrow. I've got the whole week off work, actually.
Griff: Lots of time to catch up, then! How's 10 sound, by the harbour?
Riley (inner voice): I would love that more than anything.
Riley: I'd like that.
Griff: It's set, then!
Riley: Do you mind if I grab your number?
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- Chapter 2 -
In Griff‘s route, in the dialogue history during the flashback that Riley experienced at Sal's parents' house, the names of Dad and Mum were reversed, which means that what dad said was marked as what mum said, and vice versa.
This problem only occurs in dialogue history, not during normal gameplay.
I believe there might need some attention.
Again, thanks to Choob and all other contributors to Dawntide, for bringing such a wonderful VN to the world. Wish you best of luck with the next updates!