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Dog-tastic news

I couldn't have said it better myself. 

I've been a fan of Dawn Chorus for two or so years I think, and these changes feel weird. Of course, the author can do as they please with it since it's their work, but I'm still going to write my opinion about it because this novel is very special to me. I apology in advance for any grammar mistakes. English is not my first language. 

First off, Mikko. With his neutral expression, he looks like he's in a constant catatonic state. Also, maybe this is just a nitpick and I'm dumb, but why is Torulf almost as big as Devon? I get that he's a fuckboy and works out, but Devon is a sport's coach and he's older. That and his younger face don't make sense to me xd. They look great tho.

Rune looks much better than last time. Still a little off, but I guess we'll get used to it. (His face has a different shading or texture compared to his body or something. Dunno.) Lake looks fine. Except for his snout. It looks shorter than it should be. As for Travis, he's still a cutie.

On the other hand, Arvo doesn't look that good to me. His face look's kinda weird and too round. 

Overall, I think they're going in a good direction but they still need a few tweaks here and there.

Where's Klaus tho? Is he doing some sketchy things in the forest again? 

Aiden and Dallan my beloveds. Can't wait for chapter 2!

Edit: TAAATE 😭 

I think there aren't any nsfw scenes with him. To unlock the other endings you have to confront him when you're talking to him at the campfire. Then, depending on whether you were just friendly or chose the ❤️ options, you'll get its respective ending. If I remember correctly xd.

Ohh. Got it. Thanks xd

Small spoiler for the polyamorous rute.

Perhaps this is a personal preference but, why introduce Russel at the end of day 5 or 6 (I don't remember) and just go at it with him without being able to choose whether you want to or not? Even after Adrian said how much he admired and liked Dom romantically. (I don't know if the same happens if you choose Axel as the love interest.) And I know it's because of Russel that Adrian thinks about dating Dom and Axel at the same time, but, to me, that sex scene felt unnecesary. I'm kinda dissappointed with it. Maybe it's because I don't like Russel that much. Anyway I was expecting something else. 

Idk I hope they change it back because I feel bad for Mikko 😔💔

Quite a few versions back, I remember that if you chose to go on a walk with Mikko on day 2, you had the option to hug him when he was making music. Even if you were on a different route (in my case it was Rune's). But now it just doesn't let you do that. Is this a bug or an intentional decision? Xd

Definitely one of the best VNs i've read. Funny, endearing, real and dramatic. Loved the soundtrack, especially the main theme and the credits song. Also Luke, my beloved funny cat.

Ohh, thanks!

Hi! Is there a Discord server about Dawn Chorus? I can't find it.

I just finished Rune's update and it was truly lovely. It gave him so much depth, and I like him even more. Can't wait for the next updates. I really love this VN.