This is such an insanely good visual novel, I swear, everything Hap's touches is blessed. Quality work, I was completely enthralled the entire way through.
I hope once you get volume 2 finished that you will remake the first volume, it feels all over the place as compared to the later parts. I get that happens with monthly releases where you sometimes lose track of your narrative but a remake would do this wonders, especially with newer art.