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lmao why are you tracing summer time saga? it's so obvious that it hurts

are there any plans to include an option before the scene with victoria, when you touch her breasts, to allow the player to disengage? while i found the lore about evolution genuinely interesting to read through, i actually felt really bad about, in my opinion, breaking emelie's trust, especially since the mc instinctively goes under the bra etc

What you describe as "Realism" is actually a type of writing inexperience. Namely over explanation or overly detailed writing. it saps the story of subtext and takes away from your own interpretation. i found the writing in this game amazing, every character has their very own distinct character that makes them discernable, something alot of writers don't fully succeed in, accidentally using the characters as outlets for themselves. The writing is cutesy, sure, but it's also supposed to fit the cutesy artstyle. The fact you want Emelie to be more bitchy isn't adding to the level of writing, quite the opposite, it makes the character a generic stereotype of a bitchy princess, which emelia is not. Then, your replies for the player are also just poorly written degenerate speech. You also just starkly misrepresent the characters in the way you've tried to write them. Emelie is characterized as naive and innocent, but a little bit more dirty under her barrier that she puts up due to being raised as a princess with good manners, Yet you characterized her as the bitchy, judgemental princess brat. It's a sexual stereotype and unfitting. Then, you write maple as a bimbo with nothing in her brain but her desire to tease a person that's already in a relationship *yet another sexual stereotype*, then you go on to have maple say "I couldn't find any water-proof ones [Pasties]"
which doesn't make sense because she is literally the person who MAKES the clothes and swimwear in hog haven. Your writing is LESS realistic, because nobody actually talks the way that you write your characters, while the conversations that the characters have, while a bit unusually sexual(which is fine, this is a porngame), are perfectly reasonably realistic. They obviously optimized for timing and scale of the project, but other than that, the writing itself is great. You're not looking for better writing, you are looking for another degenerate porn game that doesn't care about the characters, in which you can live out your uninhibited sexual fantasies without caring about the characters themselves.

Came here for the horny, stayed because of Billy. He's my best bud and i am crying