oh brother if i had to guess 2 more updates and youll be climbing the ranks on this site.im happy with how the story is turning also. and when we fell in battle again and had to get waken up honestly didnt think they would escape.i do hope we get more content for the girls we live with already at home.but at the end of the day your creating art and i cant wait to see how much you make of it.as always good luck with life and your endeavors.
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brother take all the time you need, just make sure the story isnt cringe and make sure we keep this mc egotistic thinking hes jesus. 2. you got some good plot points and i have high hope for everything upcoming in the story and characteristics of the girls to tie into it.3. the battle scene with the purple worm A tier stuff brother. mostly talking about the strats behind it and how you showed it.anyways best of luck on your work and wish you the best of life