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I feel you executed it well. I look forward to seeing more from you!

I greatly enjoyed this! Both the artwork and presentation are fun and wonderful. :) 

This was well done. The subtle escalation as the partner becomes more abusive felt very real and frustrating. I enjoyed reading this story. 

Just finished this demo. It was a fun sample of what promises to be an interesting game. I look forward to seeing the finished product. :)

I'm enjoying this so far. I feel like the writing is very good and feels genuine. I also feel that you've done an excellent job of establishing the atmosphere. Very immersive! I can't wait to play more days!

Just finished playing this demo. It's so cute. I really like Mychael's character. His shyness and his conflict about not wanting to let the MC leave, but also not wanting to hurt them was very engaging. I also love the art style. Everything's so warm and cozy. I look forward to seeing future updates! 

This was a delightful little oneshot. I love the idea of the universe and I found the artwork and pacing to be perfect. :) Thank you for sharing this lovely work of art. 

I really enjoyed this demo. I love VN concepts that involve obsessive characters. One of my favorite aspects of this was the use of sound. The moment where the player is in the dark but you can hear Dmitri breathing and whispering is a startling moment and honestly spooked me.

My only critique would be that the conversations feel one-sided, and I suppose that's probably the intent. But the player spends a lot of time in their head and I feel like some of that time could be spent having a more engaging back and forth with Dmitri. I realize, however, that this is a demo and that the final version will likely be different.

All in all, this was an enjoyable experience! :)