I'm not saying you should use my suggestion because my english isn't excellent either ,is better to get a person who speaks and writes english as a first language since a lot of english speakers are gonna be buying/playing the full version later.
So far it's nice, the art is nice, the story is ok, but I'd suggest you hire a translator on full release when all the chapters are done. Lines like "my plane broke" should be "my plane crashed" , "I damaged my ass" should be "my ass hurts like hell" , "I feel like a piece of junk" should be "I feel like crap/ shit".
No, it's very clear it's not a native japanese, there are some native japanese dubbers on youtube. The gameplay is very nice with a lot of attention to detail but that voice really needs more work put into it. And if the VA is not a native japanese speaker I feel the voice would be very good in english as well.
You're welcome, I enjoy playing itch io games and it's really cool when a dev like yourself is so quick to respond to bugs and what not. I don't have the kind of money to sub on patreon. But when th full game gets a release either here or steam, you can bet I'm buying this at full price.
I went to the slope at X-30 , Y-23. I got ammo extension and ammo refund and had full ammo energy so the crystals are not giving me the red energy when I shoot them. But if I use 1 red energy to fire a Force shot and fired my normal weapons at the crystals to fill up the empty red slot + getting "ammo refund" I can get one Overcharge shot without buying the Overcharge upgrade lol I think I broke it.
Found a bug that breaks the game. One morning I picked up a letter near my door and went to the pub. The cutscene starts but where is the MC going? She says "get behind" but since the MC isn't behind it just stays like this.
Your old version is more stable, this version crashes every 3 - 4 minutes. error "out of memory". Other games on itch.io I played with Renpy engine don't have this issue.
Lin's and Kali's story are great. I did notice Lin has 1 climax animation and was wondering if the rest of the girls are gonna get similar treatment? Because so far, most of the other climax scenes are "play sex animation into still frame with screen shake" type transitions while Lin has one very smooth climax animation and the rest of the animations are back and forth 2 frame animations. Is this to save space or are they place holders for full animations in the future? Just askin.
If I click "view all by gillenew" some of your games are not listed. Even this game. The only way I found this is by google searching the name of this game and coming to this page.
Just played it and it's so dang cute and so dang fun but it was on mouse and keyboard. One bug I found was when you holding pictures about to tear them and she chases after you and grabs it from you. The hand that held the picture will be stuck in the tear pose while the empty hand is free to move. The only way to fix this for me was to grab another picture and tear it then both hands go back to normal. I'll go play some more and see if I can find more bugs.
random Victory bugs, dunno why but sometimes after winning a fight it says victory and supposed to send you back to the map but instead you just stand and can't do anything but close the window and load a save slot.
Just do the things in order, find explosives, progress the story, encounter allys, more story, get VR card, etc each time you progress Jenna talks to herself telling the player the next step.
Woah hold up, isn't some of the backgrounds very similar to summertime saga? You might wanna change that. Also didn't anyone ever comment about the font? The font is very uncomfortable to read as the "S" is really putting it off. I would suggest you go look for someone to check the writing as I know english isn't your first language. And you should add a "This is the end of the demo" sign.
Odd, if I try to download it just makes the game full screen instead of letting me download an offline version. The treat series downloads fine except for this.
Really like how you guys spend time and effort to rig the vag and anal flexing. Some games just make the dick clip through the general area where the vag is and call it a day especially the japanese titles.
