Thanks, happy to hear you enjoyed it! The MC being a bit emotionally guarded is deliberate at this point. He has a character arc, just like the girls do. Eventually he will open up more.
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Hey, thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
Yeah, nothing I can really do about the elbows right now unfortunately. That may change when I overhaul all of my graphical stuff some time in the first half of next year when I build a new PC though.
Pubic hair is probably not gonna happen, sorry! More medium sized chests are definitely coming down the line eventually, however. When I first made all of the main girls I deliberately made a range going from small to large, however it just so happened that the two smallest (Akatsuki/Sarah) and the two biggest (Lucy/Vicky) got all of the early attention.
Thanks, that's an awesome review!
And just to answer the very last point: while I would say my writing certainly has improved over the course of making the game, it's more just having room to breathe. Same with the Akatsuki introduction you mentioned previously actually; in the early content I felt a lot of pressure to make things move and get things established so as not to bore the reader, meaning the first three girls were more rushed than I would like. Especially Lucy; in hindsight I would have liked to take things much slower with her, and go deeper into the story with her mother.
Hey, sorry, but it won't be optional. She isn't going to be rammed right into the group as if she belongs overnight, a lot of stuff is going to happen before she even begins coming in. But ultimately, this is a kinetic novel. With the way I write all of the girls being interconnected and interacting constantly, making any of them optional would massively increase the time required to make every update.