Oh! People asked about the hidden sprite before, so I thought you were mentioning that, but no one said anything about the scene before that; Thank you!
I'll fix this alongside some other bugs and patch it asap!
Thank you for reporting the bug. I didn't find any errors, but I think you mean the scene where Bram hides behind a rock, and then his sprite is gone for two sentences? If that's the case, it was intentional! C:
If it's not, could you please specify the scene? It would be of extreme help if you did. :'D
I'm happy that you like it, there's more being worked on already, but first I'm improving the overall atmosphere, so I can deliver updates regularly! c:
I love this VN! I mean, I felt good reading this, It's been some time since a VN made me feel something like that. The characters are relatable and lovely, the art is fantastic and the story is heartwarming and mysterious, I can't help but love it.
It's okay! It helped me fix some of the grammar. I want to improve my English writing skills, but Portuguese is way different, it might take some time to understand how to better structure sentences, and the way commas work as I know they differ from how we use them here in Brazil, but I'll give it my best!
I'm just reviewing some lousy grammar and bugs right now, so I can release the Android version with everything already fixed, it shouldn't take too much time. I hope you enjoy it!
I don't know if you'll ever continue to post new updates, but I'm here to say your work is the one who inspired me to create my own VN, and I just published the DEMO, so thank you, a lot! XD
Andy's just the type of character that I love, but would probably annoy the shit out of me irl! Also, he's gayer than everyone else in the VN and that's beautiful~ As for Alder, he's sweet and loving, I like him a lot <3
Keep up the good work, I can't wait for the next update! =w=
God.. so long since I got to read the first build and I finally had time for the second and f#ck.. that was amazing, made me cry, obviously.. and laugh a lot too.. You just put a smile on my face through the whole build! Can't wait for the next one~
Okay, so... That was amazing, I was feeling like shit (Nothing new here) and wanted to get away a little, so I started playing this VN. I tought I would just give up about 5 minutes in and go to sleep as usual, but I got so involved with the story, that I devoured the first chapter and fell in love with that world that was created (or the end of that world, lol). The art is lovely and the little backstory I saw about Coop, hits home like a truck.. the characters are sweet and Coop is best boi of course.. I'm already excited for the next build! sz
Btw, I love the protagonist colors, rare to find a VN where the character aren't all "normal colours".
