Thanks so much for the feedback, this is all great! As I read your feedback I agreed with everything you said, I wish I had more time to go back and implement all this (especially the organ suggestion for Good Old YOU, that was brilliant)! If I ever end up using these songs again in the future, I'll be sure to make all the changes you were talking about, since I think that could definitely make these songs just that much better. Thanks again! :)
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Thank you for the feedback
The reason the second one sounds like quite a leap in comparison to the first is because it was actually the last song I made despite being the second chronologically, and I made it in around an hour (since that was how much time was left of the jam). It definitely could have used quite a bit of work though, and as for the first song not fitting that's my fault as I changed my vision for the game after I made it, but I didn't redo it because I felt it would be a waste of time.
Thank you so much once again, your critiques were very well worded and I'll definitely be sure to apply them to any future projects I do!