I'm disappointed with chapter 4.
It felt like some wattpad fanfic with the whole “making someone jealous" trope and the “bad boy/I do illegal stuff look at me i’m so cool" act Teo has. I’m not sure if it's actually his personality or just poor character writing but I couldn't help but cringe every time he would act like an edgy 14 year old who thinks crime is cool.
Like the whole parking sign scene was just too much...
I didn’t finish the chapter because of annoyance and lack of interest. Sorry for the harsh feedback I just wanted to be honest because I honestly appreciated the earlier chapters.