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You are right, it worked, thank you so much! Love this game, you have done an amazing job so far 

Hi, I had a question. I usually play on joyplay on mobile, and in the new version i cant save, like, at all, not even the automatic ones appear, so I wanted to know if someone might know what the issue is, and how to fix it, or other app I can use

I read a lot of stories in here, and I must say, this is one of the best. The worldbuilding is really good so far, you can see the amount of love and dedication to the proyect. All the characters so far are really charming on their own way (like, wasn't expecting Gabriel to be such a flirt and I absolutely love it). I really like the interactions, and I loved that se can read their thoughs after talking to the warden in situations like in the camp, and I love even more the interactions that the poly routes have (only played the Gabriel and van Leare, but assume the other ones will have similar moments like the one those two have at camp). Love the Warden as an MC, and if something happends to the raven I will riot. And way the plot is being set up is amazing, and really makes me want to read more. Take your time, you are doing amazing, but also can't wait for more.

While you do make a good point on the MC not contesting the terms in those two cases, I want to add that in the case of the armband, while you make a great point in there (since that's something I that myself would think to add) its not only a show of goodwill, it's also a promise of the master to protect Asterion. I don't remenber if that's explicitly stated, but as the contrat is right know, in the case that Asterion is made go into the Valley without the master being able to help in any way it would mean that we somehow failed our promise to protect him since that's the only way for that to happend (meaning that in reallity, there should never be a escenario were both Asterion is forced to go into the valley, and the master had no way of helping avoid it). And I think the master knows this, and that's why he doesn't contest in any way. It's his way of telling and showing Asterion that's he is willing to do anything to always protect him, even if he could find loopholes or arguments in order to make it easier for him, he chooses not to. Or that's what I thinks at least lol. And I fucking loved Pedro in this chapter. Like, I already loved Pedro, but my man stole the show for me this time. When He said "I'm a piece of shit and drunk enough to be a menace" to Themba i lost it lol. And as you said, using this chance to show more of Themba both with his conversation and inner monologe was something I really liked.

Could talk about this game for so long lol. But yeah, great chapter, great game