Thank you so much ❤️
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dude the story was so good, i forgot i was playing an avn. hats off to how the mc was written. not a lot of people can pull off writing an asshole to begin with, but shin is written that way on purpose to give him a growth arc. it is risky because the reader may lose interest halfway. but thats not the case for me. the pacing is good, that you really get the chance to know the mc and find things about him that you can resonate with.
if youre looking for a go signal to download and play this . well, this is probably it.
looking forward to future updates
the story drags on for an unreasonable amount of time. too many unimportant exchanges or characters that dont really affect the story. if youre going to make decion based vn, dont overcrowd it with side characters that continue to show up when you clearly dont choose their path. frustrating how you take a straight path only to get a cliff hanger.
the visuals are good. the story is okay. but the MC is a plank. there should be sexual tension between characters of an ero story. also, the MC never gets flustered, making him very unrelatable. he is either cool fighter guy or nice guy that cares. and while thats good and all, it lacks whats needed to push the narrative forward. you feel bored following him along because you cant relate (and c'mon, we are also here for some bed action). i hope you take note of this and improve your writing. wish you the best.