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I don't have any error corrections sheet in the zip file.

Other features that would be nice: variable assignment, logic, and the ability to add scripts in some other language.

In general, replace every " - " with " -- " in markdown for latex to correctly render these as en-dashes rather than hyphens

Map:

east and west frankia are labelled as east and west "francia"

&&&&&treasure

you have both 54-55 (for armor) and 55-56 (for ammunition)

wine is proscribed? By whom?

you have both 69-70 (for crop seeds) and 70 (for ornamental seeds)

Puddingstone:

"witches" -> "witch's"

maps:

Is the map always to a bigger hoard? Or is there a 70% chance it leads to a horde one size bigger, and, if it does not, a 30% chance it leads to a horde 2 sizes bigger?
The Sculptors Medium -> should this be "Sculptor's"?

magic

Invisibility

Powdered silver---how much? What does it cost?

Sulphur:

"it's" -> "its"

turn undead

"cups" -> "cup's"

"Many has" -> Many have

ruislip

01.09

Add: If the dog dies, the face dies too.

01.10

Add to the paragraph about the faceless man: He cannot speak.

Consider giving the faceless man a memory, since King Roderick in Cnivia also lost his face but does retain his memory.

blulach:

"They would not be the first to try." Tbh I preferred it as "You would not be the first to try." but this might be down to personal taste

donenashoe: "back-back" -> "back-pack" or "backpack"

albann

08.14 cernyff

"seceded" -> "ceded"

10.21 Ffordunum

How much protection money? Maybe the players could pay it.

Who is the leader?

pyorra

# cnivian kingdom

03.27

"Worth 200hs each." -> "Worth 200sp each."?

"Worth 400hs to a scholar." -> "Worth 400sp to a scholar."?

"Worth 500hs." -> "Worth 500sp."

09.27

What's the sp value of the powdered silver?

05.28

"clustered either side" -> "clustered on either side"

06.28

"his uncle as weak" -> "his uncle is weak"

09.28

4

"A mosaics" -> "A mosaic"

6

"free of blood or grime" -> "free of blood and grime"

23

"a large glass pitcher of clear fluid" How large? How heavy? Is it fixed to the floor? Can it be thrown like a splash weapon?

25

"a dim glow can be seen far, far below." How far? How wide is the well? Could it be climbed? What's glowing?

31

"The mouths are set to snap shut if the weight within the mouth is reduced." What if any weight is added to the jaws? Can the players try an indiana-jones style switcheroo?

36

"With enough food, they could be adopted as pets." How much food?

# west frankia

14.27

attentions to Kunopennos -> attention of Kunopennos

The demon deals 1d6 damage per 3hd but it starts with only 2 hd. Should you add "per 3HD, rounding up"?

14.29

"rules over the town wit" -> "rules over the town with"

# Brecheliant

22.27

"their lives savings" -> "their lives' savings"

23.27

"Read, they contain details of magical wards" add a period at the end of the sentence. Also, which wards?

24.27

"All three have broken legs and messages bound for Remus" add the content of the messages. "and messages calling for aid to Crociatonum" or similar

22.28

"Once proven trustworthy" -> "Once the party has proven trustworthy"

23.28

"encumbers are heavy" -> "encumbers as heavy" also this passage uses the old "medium/heavy" armor typology instead of "maille/full-length maille", this may or may not be an error

20.29

"two Sphinx" -> "two Sphinxes"

"go free.Once" -> "go free. Once"