Copper: "Oh man, I'm gonna get paid so much for selling you to my client. I might just retire."
Cyrus: "Aw, he wants to be my friend :3"
Copper: *sells him out like he said he would
Cyrus: :0
Okay, it's official, this is my favorite VN in development so far, I can't wait for more.
I just have one suggestion, could you make the MC's dialogue and his thoughts a little more distinguishable? sometimes it's hard to tell if he's talking or thinking.
Besides that everything is perfect, keep it up.
PS: I can help with a Spanish translation if you ever consider it ;)