Welcome back! I've been kicking my feet waiting on this. Take all the time you need to make it. :)
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I appreciate NSFW when its done well. I think most people enjoy it. Just stay away from flowery language and you should be ok. For my character, when they are not seen, I tend to just self insert. So, like a 30's woman with a pink curly mullet and face piercings. Creepy things are fun, the whole feel of the game so far gives me a cozy dread vibe so it would fit right in. The font is perfect! I actually have an eye condition and despite that it was easy to read and didn't strain the eye too much. I have seen in other games occasionally they have an option to make the text bigger but I have no idea if that is easy to code. But if it is having it a little bigger (or the option to switch it) would be nice. For questions, (forgive me if answered elsewhere) do you have a discord for the game?
I always like to see pronoun selection in games. The music was nice and not overwhelming/fit the tone of the scenes. There was a good balance with the choices offered, sometimes VN tend to ramble without enough player input and this one avoided that problem. For a festival character, IDK a buff guy wearing bunny ears just seems amusing. Take it or leave it :)