Okay it had potential the only thing i was confused with was: The speed is too high, even for running. Idk if you intended this game to be a fast paced horror game or a slow one like many horror games out there, just a thought... just a thought.
So i tried it, it was good! Defenitely becauase i am a pussy lol. You should work more in it, and i promise you. You will be big eventually! You did great for your first game! so try to do more if you want to (don't feel pressed to do so.)