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well what can I say it was a wonderful story for the first chapter. I like the story so far about a high school student transported to another magical world. I think it's a unique story. I don't find this kind of story everywhere either. the characters are cute and well drawn plus the background is magnificent honestly from my point of view it deserves 5 stars there were no bugs the writing was perfect from my point of view so there is nothing to say^^

I hope you are resting well :(

What can I say? I see that this VN so far and incredible from my side this story gives a lot of point of view on the mc who has difficulty handling all the events that happen to him I really hope to see how he will improve

Honestamente, la historia fue buena hasta ahora. para el primer capitulo esta muy bueno

So far I have found that the story is filled with a lot of mysteries plus I find that the style of the VN is really incredible from my point of view

I hope you're doing well and I hope we get to see you again just one thing I like your VN so far for me I just discovered it and I think the story really took my breath away Breath I stayed until the end anyway I can' I'm waiting to see what happens next and maybe see how much better you get at drawing

give him time, he will improve ;o

This vn is special, how can I say it, it is unique like all the others but above all it is the story

Well there is no bug for me and this vn is not that bad especially story ^^

Oh...i see i see

At least you pay it but a little what

don't think people will forget this game, maybe most of them, but not everyone.

I see it's true that in the art world it's paid, it's a real shame that there is no one who can do it for free, for example if I could help you I would do it for you for free but as I have no level in the art so I can't do much

I have a quick question, you really don't have anyone to help you?

Honestly it was good I'm still surprised by this VN for a demo

Nope x)

Hey!!, I hope you are well I wanted to put a comment long enough but not too long to say what I thought of this VN,

In my opinion and I think that the people who watched and played this game, it's incredible, Sam's story really touched me, the passages where he tells about his past are really touching, Sully and really one of the most beloved characters. kinder and cuter than I've seen the characters here are really well done, I like the term of this game of this novel, all the CGs of the game are magnificent there were even details in the hot passages ~~ we could say,

BUG

None on my side of course, I find that the writing was well written there were no errors there were no bugs either

NOTE

Or frankly I'm amazed the rating I'm going to give it is a 5 star it shows that you took your time with every little detail I once again like the theme of this vn honestly I loved it thank you

It's a great story and I think the characters are cute.

Oh hmm

Ah it doesn't matter you can take all the time you want

it's good the new chapter to be honest even if it was in chinese using an application to translate it allows me to follow the adventure but in any case I really liked the story so far I hope there will be a sequel ^^

Interesting story for a demo it's still interesting I'm not going to put notes but I can't wait to see what you prepare next!!

You just revealed your mask x)

The only thing I can say about the places where there were black backgrounds and frankly I find the car beautiful x)

Well what can I say to begin with, I'm quite amazed at how the story unfolds from start to finish even though it's still just the beginning of the journey, I can't wait to see what that will take us.

I'm not going to talk about it but it was a reference towards the end of the Jojo break x)

frankly I find that the story is really cool how to say the main character who becomes a (lion man) and who is reincarnated in another world with hot characters

Good for a demo the writing, the characters, the scenario, the story, have already made me want to see a sequel ;)

It's a very good story

Et franchement tu as un très bon français et un très bon anglais au moins tu t'améliores^^

Deux fois donc tu es assez fort en vrai tu as un vrai talent et bien franchement merci pour l'explication c'était agréable de te parler et franchement j'ai hâte de voir qu'est-ce que tu nous prépares /^-^/

et bah merci juste une question c'est quoi le but du game jay? y a pas de

récompense?

Salut je suis un peu nouveau mais je vais être direct déjà je viens de finir le nouveau chapitre incroyable Master Class insane le VN elle-même et incroyable le début jusqu'à la fin beaucoup d'émotions le scénario les script les animations des personnages ou l'environnement incroyable j'ai bien aussi aimé les recettes ça va m'aider à devenir un très bon patricien (surtout à mes BF) (*idiot de puro x) c'est juste incroyable Paul-Loup et enfin bf avec Charles franchement je suis heureux je suis aussi heureux parce que en finale tu t'améliores en anglais ou en français je sais pas du tout quelle langue de base tu es mais je te félicite d'avoir créé ce VN franchement si j'avais une note à te donner ça serait au moins un dix étoiles mais on peut pas du coup je te donne 5 étoiles franchement tu m'as comblé je resterai à l'écoute jusqu'à au futur mise à jour et aussi bonne chance pour le game Jay même si tu participes ou tu participes pas même si tu gagnes ou tu gagnes pas c'est pas grave en tous les cas tu t'amuses et tu t'améliores c'est tout passe une bonne soirée passe une bonne journée je repasserai plus tard si tu m'as laissé un commentaire ici et aussi (Puromaru) si tu vois ce message tu as intérêt de laisser un commentaire sympathique

Thanks to my boyfriend (who forgot to give 5 stars lol) :(

Well I'm totally surprised at the way the story is told, amazing, I can't wait to see what happens next and see what's in store for us, this VN ODYSSEY - 5 stars

In addition I just reread the comment and the theory of the guy below he is not wrong on certain points but for the moment the main character has not yet released his potential plus I have a theory about the king and tell me or correct me if he knew that James was going to arrive in this world and what's more he knew that he was a human, did he master magic to see the future?, but for now we don't have many clues about him

Furthermore, we don't know much about him, let alone the memories or nightmares that the main character has.

Ah excuse me, I clarified badly, I was mainly talking about the king and it was him who knew that James was going to arrive in this world

Well, frankly incredible story, it's crazy every time we have information it raises more questions there are a lot of mysteries especially around the white wolf plus I want to know a little more about the other species