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a bit of a shame that Kiranas dairy establishes that her kids will be gnomes no matter what instead of half-humans because she would have been a great opportunity to include hyper pregnancy. it's probably not to late to change that if you want to. I'm really looking forward to traditional lamia sex with Camilla and hope she gets an update soon

no problem I understand. My biggest issue was the tagging so thanks for fixing that

The art and characters are very charming. but I'm going to be honest, the yuri aspect was a real turn off for what would otherwise be great writing. You really should properly tag it as yuri. I realize this is a very big ask since it would require additional art assets, but with it getting harder and harder to find non-gay content could you have an option to make Rory a guy?

Oh, I didn’t realize that KoiKatsu had such an issue. Don’t delete the files that you tried using I’d like to hold out Hope that someone will come up with a patch to fix that issue since I was considering to try to make a birth scene myself.

I wasn’t referring to the make up I was referring to Zoe’s hair. Koikatsu lacks the detail to allow us to identify characters by their faces so it’s easier to identify them by their hair. So the characters hair is basically their identity and altering their hair completely changes their identity.

I hope I didn’t wait too long for you to notice this reply

from the sound of it The next update will be the last one but just in case I want to let you know that for pregnancy content you should ideally try to have two pregnant sex scenes for each character that features it. Fortunately, you understand  one thing that many hentai authors get wrong, which is angling the camera so that the belly is almost always visible during the sex scenes. Showing the birth for some characters is a very nice inclusion but the one for Rose felt really rushed and lacked the detailed head emerging that Nina’s had. 

In the future, I strongly recommend that you avoid presenting characters one way, then have them end up being something completely different. The main example being Rose who is presented as the nerdy girl during the prologue, but then ends up being a playboy bunny.

You should also be very careful about changing a characters appearance throughout the course of the game and only do it if it’s absolutely necessary. In Corrupted Kingdoms, Emma at the beginning, has a very interesting and unique model but then it is changed to something far more generic looking. While Zoe in this game isn’t an issue since she’s a minor side character, but the change to her model in chapter 3 was totally unnecessary. One time only changes like the date scene with Emily and that one sex scene with Nina are fine since it’s just trying out something different, and it makes sense for Nina to want to remove all restraints when having sex.