They both look correct on my end now.
Keep up the good work!
Store page suggestion: there’s a small preview of the Volume 1 pages half-hidden behind the overworld map, but it might be helpful to have the map-of-map-squares (with or without the text below it) under the illustrated map?
Like “These regions are in Volume 1”, to be complemented with similar pages for volumes 2 & 3?
Similarly, it looks like the back page of that page-fan might be one of the detail maps? It seems like it might be useful to have a thumbnail of what those pages look like.
(I obviously haven’t bought this yet; I have it penciled in for next month)
I’m not actually in the bundle (I don’t really have anything to contribute), but two questions:
Congrats, looking forward to trying this!
Just downloaded, one very minor suggestion:
-Mr. "Let's make all our downloads share a common prefix" ;)
> All-In-One Chart: A single page with all the info you'd need for a game? I can do that.
Oh yay, I came here to suggest maybe doing that with the blank page 12 :)
(I ran the PDF through pdfbook2 today, but decided to hold off on printing/stapling it until I could whip up a useful back cover)
(Probably also on your list, and possibly already done, but: maybe also update the 0D0P table in the book with the update that goes to D10?)
(I also made a 2-page version of your character sheet for duplex printing. I'm not sure I've ever seen a back-and-front character sheet in the wild, but I've wanted one several times. Maybe that's just me, though.)
Minor note: when I downloaded the v1.0 demo, I appreciated that all the files started with `Everline_` -- now the character sheet is just `Character Sheet_v1.2.pdf` sitting next to the other 8-or-so "Character Sheet (4).pdf" files in my not-sorted-enough Downloads folder.
Also, there's an extra space between the underscore and "Core Rule" :)