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Thank you for your inputs and feedback. It's really helpful for the story and it helps with the improving, but if I'm being honest I kinda feel close to scrapping it all already. I've had less time to invest in the game lately. I think I need a break to focus on some real life things for a while. We'll see how that goes.

Some dialogue options with Puck are hidden in case MC never met the trickster. Its just one of the secrets that might become bigger later.

Yes. I'm still thinking about one more RO but it's not settled yet.

There's a certain red flag RO that will show up in Chapter 6 on Cleias route, and later if you went the Grandfather route. Still, even if you think a RO is all nice and kind, time might change things. (Some will grow up differently)

Hey, welcome back! Hope you enjoy!

Thank you!

Thank you so much for your kind words and for spotting bugs. I appreciate it! Hope to see you here on the next updates too!

Hats off to a fellow spoon enjoyer! :)

Fixed! Thanks!

Fixed! Thanks for helping, bug-catcher!

I added a text box with a confirm button under. It should fix the issue. I also found another bug in chapter 5 regarding two different values. Forgot to add a $. Should work as intended. :)

Thanks! I'll check it out tomorrow and try to fix it if I can.

Hey! I'm not home right now so I can't check the code, but I played through the first chapter on the phone and managed to advance. Could you please tell me what word you used? I'll try to fix it when I can. (I believe this must be about the first word said when MC is a baby?)

Thank you!!

The password is Diavolul (it's in the hint phrase). You have to type it in the box and press submit :)

Yes, I released each chapter individually. As for the 'Reborn' in the title, I improved the writing and grammar in the earlier chapters since English is not my first language. Also a few other options and secrets added.

Thank you for playing!

Chapter 6 will be quite different based on the chosen Veil and element. There will be a lot more fighting scenes overall. It's finally time.

Hey, if you're talking about the maze password, the answer is in the hint phrase itself. 

Hey! Hope you like it!

Român* și mersi că ai jucat :) 

Următorul update va îmbunătăți și mai mult calitatea writing-ului și multe alte aspecte. Sper să joci și atunci! (Probabil a 2-a saptamana din decembrie)

Va fi mult mai fain!

Thanks!

Glad to know it worked out in the end!

I know I wear glasses and my vision is not perfect, but still, I made a stupid mistake. While I was testing the code to see if it's all working well, I apparently forgot to delete a gender flag I placed for this chapter's bug fixing run. It's all fine now. Thanks for that and thank you for your kind words!

Thank you very much for your support! I hope to see you stick around. Heheh indeed!

Thanks for reading the story!

Your question will be answered later in the story :)

As for height, it will matter for sure. Of course, now the MC is still quite young, so it doesn't matter as much, but it will have an impact later. Some characters will react differently depending on your height.

Right, so that character is a bit different. There are a lot of spoilers involved, but he's not an RO. Of course, there will be way 'worse' people and RO's present in the story that will show up as time passes by. MC is still 'protected' by the family, but that will gradually change as they will get older.

As for your second question, there is, but I want to portray it differently. RO's will be willing to do it, but there will be many obstacles, especially from some of the parents, relatives, and from the general population as these relationships are frowned upon in the kingdom. 

Thanks!

Hey!

Thank you for pointing them out! I fixed the issues. I also plan to revisit the chapters later to improve some of the flow of the text. 

Also, one thing I'm curious about. Was the password to the chest too obvious?

Thanks. It's coming soon!

Hey! I want to thank you for taking the time to share some thoughts on the game. Your feedback means a lot, and I'm happy that you liked it. I have big plans for the future of the story and the family. The elements will be even more unique. For example, being Spirit, there will be optional dialogue choices that might change some outcomes. The same goes for others, each with their own nature. As for ROs, their gender will be a fixed point in the story. The idea is to give each of them unique personalities and problems that might not be as relevant if they were gender-selectable. I also have more RO's in mind. For example, two will show up in the next chapter. The idea is that this aspect of the game will be more relevant a little later, as MC will grow up. You'll still get to meet a majority of them as years pass by. Also, Chapter 4 will take a little more time to make than the earlier chapters. Thank you for your kind words :)

Now that's a wild question, haha! Moving on, there will be 2 male RO's for now. One will show up in the next chapter.

Thank you for playing. How was it?

Thank you!

Thank you!

Yes, there were many of them, but mostly as a way to tell that MC doesn't know what to say due to their age. There won't be as many in the future, only when truly needed :) Thanks!

Thank you!

Hey, thanks!

Thank you!

Thank you for trying my game! I will release the whole chapter 1 in the next few days.

Excuse me, i need a spoooo... it's okay I found one!

Thank you for trying my game! There will be plenty of opportunities to make people suffer later, good and/or bad :)

Thank you for trying my game!