Pretty fun! The platforming bits with the boats were more frustrating than interesting, and there there was one bit where I fell into the water, spawned over the water, fell again immediately, then had two sets of dialog going at once. There are also some meshes that have no collision (the wall behind the double jump boots and the wall behind the final fire).
However, in general (in terms of story/narrator) I had a lot of fun with this, although the length definitely leaves something to be desired.