Must say that artwork and story is lovely but i can clearly see that english isn't your first language and i thought reading it could give me stroke. so one of the most important things is to have someone to correct your mistakes. By now i only played till the world map to check out the menu and be able to save because near half an hour intro is in my opinion pretty long. I checked out the menu and you did very good job with how it feels. I'm looking forward to play more of it and hopes it'll become more popular. Good luck