Hey... one thing I need to ask - Contain spoiler from update 7 ->
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Did Resnick just absorved the sloth shard from Ludwig? or it's still withim him? so how come that Lust has now aquired the power of sloth? I didn't get that.
Also... good Work, and Nice writing.
Eyevin
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I must say... This one is by far one of the visual novels that really rooked me most. i'm a bit surprised with the quality of writing and storytelling. although you ond go way to far from common cliches, wich is not a problem let me be very clear, you present them well and without boring the reader
One thing that I must ask of you, if you can, is to be careful to create a good amount of tension on your story. thats something that I see many creators struggle with. Either they don't create enough tension, that make the story good and compeling, But not boring. or they do that in some forcefull way that annoys more than engage the reader.
Nevertheless, I have high expectations with this VN. Kudos for you.
I need to comend you about tackling the issue about false accusations, and showing how in these matters, people jump to conclusions before trying to analyse the facts
It takes courage to do That, specially considering the usual line of though of the target audience of your novel. I respect you for keeping firm on exposing this problem and not surrendering to the criticism
Kudos for you.
Too bad you had to spill the beans though (Becouse people are stupid) It would be a great Experience to have you try to come up With your own conclusions. and a good "hit to the face" to those who judged poorly.
(I Actually would have enjoyed the suspense, although I was one who called it was false, There was a hint of doubt that made me thirsty for the answer)
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Just Finished The Diego Route -
I must say I underestimated this visual novel in the beggining, It is really good, also , you managed to do something that I see many writers struggle to do, That is create and keep up the tension, and i really wans't expecting that. The fight between diego and Kyrex was the main factor of this, you really manage to make all the Building and the fight really tense and enterteining
Nevertheless, now I struggle with a Common issue with this Kind of novel. I really want to check Tai and Logan route (The bear seems adorable) But I Liked diego so much that i can't see myself playing any other route.
[spoiler]I would Prefer if the talk between diego and kyrex would have gone sour, and they only solve their issues after the fight that would have increased the tension in the fight and also explore that basic concept of "Man usually understand each other better with their fist rather with their words", but, it was very good nonetheless
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I don't know how much a Non-patreon can participate as giving sugestions, But, if you would allow me to do a single one. It's quite simple:
I would like to ask for you to add an event log in the game, accessible by any player at any point. That way I can check my choices and the events that transpired, remember myself of what happened before the point that I am
I ask this because, like it's said, the game is in development, and sometimes I Wait between 5 or 6 builds b4 playing Again. The main problem is is that between this time I don't remember all the events tjhat transpired And wathever choices I have made that lead me to the point that I am currently
I hope that is not too much to ask
Ty
I'm loving the work, it's fantastic.
I would ask one thing, I know it's not my right, Since I'm not a pantreon neither can I be. But one Think that really makes me sad about some visual novels is the lack of a good kissing scene. Not necessarilly the first one, But that one romantic kiss that seals the relationship. Plz, give us this =/