Been a while since I last played either game but still love your content. Downloading the latest WSGTH, so will probably post on the other thread after I play. Love your games and look forward to seeing more development.
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I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/script.rpy", line 18834, in script
if lovepris == 5:
File "game/script.rpy", line 18879, in <module>
elif pris_grat == 0 and lovepris == 15:
NameError: name 'pris_grat' is not defined
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "game/script.rpy", line 18834, in script
if lovepris == 5:
File "C:\Users\Casey\Desktop\Games\WartribeAcademy-0.6.1-pc\WartribeAcademy-0.6.1-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1832, in execute
if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
File "C:\Users\Casey\Desktop\Games\WartribeAcademy-0.6.1-pc\WartribeAcademy-0.6.1-pc\renpy\python.py", line 2059, in py_eval
return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
File "C:\Users\Casey\Desktop\Games\WartribeAcademy-0.6.1-pc\WartribeAcademy-0.6.1-pc\renpy\python.py", line 2052, in py_eval_bytecode
return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "game/script.rpy", line 18879, in <module>
elif pris_grat == 0 and lovepris == 15:
NameError: name 'pris_grat' is not defined
Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
Wartribe Academy 0.6.1
Tue Feb 16 20:03:31 2021
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Okay so after finding out about the "relationship" patch I have to say that the story is very excellent and I apologize about my outburst a while back. But I do think that the base writing for the beginning could use a proper rework to improve it even without the patch. Beside that very excellent story and I look forward to future development. Once again sorry for the outburst again.
Okay so my one biggest complaint about this game is in particular with chapter 1. I get that depending on the platform to which you release your games you have to be careful about the type of relationships your characters have with each other in particular with relationships involving blood relationships or not. However it makes it a very difficult read to initially start the game cause the entire flow is unnatural. Especially since everyone is referred to as either landlady or landlord. At the very least in the very beginning the mc's male influence should be referred to as father otherwise who the hell gave birth to him cause by law unless they are his adoptive parents no legal body would allow a landlord or landlady to raise a child. I know by now would be too late for you to update the story or coding for chapter 1-9 and especially for just one user complaining about it but you should allow user to decide relationship of initial characters for more integration into the story from the start. Other then that maybe getting someone to assist with proof reading and editing text cause the flow is also a little choppy at times. But other then that seems like a great game just a few comment on things that could be improved.
I know you say in the preface before the game starts that this will be pretty linear without to much exploration but if you want to make this a better game then at least you should set up some of the more key scenes to allow for interaction such as how evil or nice you want the character to go. For example if you want to help ashley or not, listening to the strange voice or ignoring it, and other various moments. Doesn't have to be anything too complicated just something to make it a little more interactive and to give more variety to the flow of things. A lot of visual novels have a pretty linear location path but allow for more in depth character interaction. This is less a game and more a story.
With that being said it's pretty good but considering the premise of the story, kind of wish the mc was a little less of a wuss.
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