itch.io

It's got a game page at https://felicity-banks.itch.io/case-of-the-missing-soul but it doesn't seem to play properly there. It does play properly at http://philome.la/FBanksBooks/case-of-the-missing-soul-draft1 though. I haven't changed a word since the deadline.

PS Thank you :-)

Since I'm asking dumb questions, how do I put it on itch.io in a playable way. It's on philome.a at http://philome.la/FBanksBooks/case-of-the-missing-soul-draft1/play and should be playable in most browsers, but when I tried to play it here on itch.io it was impossible to scroll down to get a full page.

brain not good. downloaded game with 5 min to space.

I agree. Especially with less than 2 hours to go!!!

A genuinely haunting scifi tale - I liked it, and enjoyed reading it, but the binary choices were frustrating (while interesting at the same time).

Spoilers...

On my second decision, I thought the game was glitching because the protagonist has placed the will somewhere, and then was led to place it elsewhere. It doesn't make logical sense. I gave up and destroyed it, which I assumed meant I lost the game (since I'd been told there was one "right" ending).

I'd recommend altering the text a bit so it looks more like indecision instead of a technical problem... and I felt annoyed and tricked when I discovered that the game was intentionally pointless.

But the writing and characterisation was really, really good.

Very interesting and fun game. I died a lot :) I played a bunch of times but never got very far, so the parts before choices begin started to irk me. I LOVED the pressure of knowing I had to choose quickly.

A self-aware descent into the yawning horror of pointlessness lurking beneath all things. Also, very funny.