Found one small mistake in the Lior route from the Red option, custom name was ignored for what I assume is the canon character name, included the screenshot, pushed below for those who wish to avoid spoilers. Edited to add other instances later in the route.
I'm glad you took a break for you! Mental health is just as important as physical health, so I'm glad you're improving! This is a game worth waiting for, I can tell, so please, take all the time you need! Thank you for the update and I hope you continue to improve your health! We're all rooting for you.
I don't mean to be rude, but the "brothers" are not related by blood, they are brothers in the same way warriors/soldiers consider themselves family, as in "band of brothers", the only true relatives are Satan and Lucifer, since Satan was born of Lucifer's wrath and never actually an angel himself as the others were. They act as family because when they arrived in the Devildom they had no one but each other to lean on and grew that much closer from it.
Looking so forward to the finished story! As someone who quits playing obey me at least once a year or so (it feels like a job and I literally play for the story and side stories) I'm so happy about this! I don't know if I'll join the discord, but I'm a writer as well, so can offer advice or proofread (my specialty is nsfw writing)!
This game was absolutely beautiful in every aspect, characters, plot, and visuals! I love the little details and the subtleties in the relationships. As much as it pained me I played through to get the bad epilogues for both routes just to have more of this story!
I realize that my post may have come off as entitled and I really apologize for that! I can tell that you're working really hard on the game because I love playing it so much!
If you're interested at all with any kind of assistance with the endings or even future projects I'm a writer, so coming up with satisfying or nail-biting conclusions is something I'm familiar with, not that your writing needs any help, the story is so well thought out and interesting.
I noticed that you mentioned making the cg's available in a gallery of some kind? I know that is something I always love in games when they have them, especially in games like this one with so many compelling characters and lovingly crafted cg's! You can tell that there was a lot of love put into the artwork for this game so it's a shame that we don't have anywhere to look back at the cg's and endings we're collecting. (I also feel like the game could use some kind of epilogue? The endings are wonderful, but a little abrupt.)
I haven't finished all the endings, but in two of the routes there are small errors so far. One being in the route where the mc gets rescued by Taylor after meeting with Beck and the dialogue has Taylor shouting his own name, the next is during the Morgan route when Park is possessing Beck and the mc stabs them (I was playing with Male LIs) the dialogue still says "her" in reference to Beck being stabbed instead of him
I want to play this game so bad because it's beautiful and the story is very compelling! But I can't continue, every time I play through the first part the dialogue read just the number 2 and takes me back to the main menu.
I love that each route is unique and truly it's own story, all of the characters feel pretty well fleshed out and fairly realistic. I also like that the intimate scenes are optional and don't affect the endings. My only real complaint is that the writing on the sex scenes leaves a little something to be desired (They just feel a bit stilted language wise, I write explicit works, so I know it's not the easiest thing all the time, but they just felt cold and somewhat medical in their descriptions), but overall it's really well written and dynamic. A very fun visual novel and worth the price for what you get.
