Eheheh, sure!! I'm honestly really happy to hear that you'd like to do this. :)
I can't find your email (I'm oblivious D:), but I joined the game's Discord server instead. I'm *Catgirl_Frostmoon* both there and on Steam. :3
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- Concept is interesting and unique: healing bullets + two character control
- Because the concept is quite different, the game requires more explanation: it's not initially obvious that you're supposed to shoot your character to heal them
- It's not clear why you're taking damage (seems to be that you take damage over time + you lose health when you drop onto another floor?)
- Relatedly, it took me a bit to realize that I was taking damage at all; I'm infamously oblivious, though, so that's probably on my end. (I did notice that Mario & Ana proper does have screen indication as to when you get hit, so that's good.)
- Music is pretty decent! You've got a strong melody line, ensuring that it sticks in your brain afterwards. The break section could probably use more underlying instrumentation, though - while the chorus/main section sounds fine as is, the break feels muddled and a bit empty. Maybe a bass line of some sort would help...?
- Rest of the sound design is pretty quiet; might be worthwhile to add bullet sounds (different for healing and hurting) and maybe something for taking serious damage.
- Generally, in English, we either write it is as "you died", "you have died", or "you are dead".
- Gameplay, once I figured out the controls, is pretty fun. It brings to mind a certain style of addictive browser game, the sort of thing you would play in class.
Keep up the good work! I hope you don't mind me commenting on this early version of the game. :3
非公開 - spring leaves no flowers [jam ver.] comments · Posted in 非公開 - spring leaves no flowers [jam ver.] comments
Manami...I really loved the fact that you explicitly made the energetic "girly girl" type into an athlete, 'cause I guess I can relate to that. XD But then...just...her confusion over sexual norms, and how she can't bring herself to say that she doesn't get "horny", it's...it's really nice to get asexual representation, especially for those who really...haven't been able to come to terms with it. Thank you.