I've been on a niche rpgmaker craze recently and for a short a simple story I got the most emotion out of this one.
Since its been 3 years since you've posted this.
If I were a teacher id give this a C however you did do one thing better than CarrionBlue proper collision. I am interested in how much you progressed though and would like to see something new.
Surprised more people havent seen this one.