Not my kind of game, the writing could use a bit of work (personally i didn't care much about Kevin), but the description from the mosaics was very funny. I suggest you're careful with the names, it's quite easy to lose track of all the people if they get introduced too quickly and with not enough care, though you did pretty good in that sense anyway, i've seen way worse.Introducing people slowly is the call.
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