At a glance, the game is visually beautiful, which managed to briefly depict the future where the only thing left are techs made by human and elaborated granularly through short messages as the micro-narrative elements.
But still, there are certain flaws, particularly the camera-changing mechanism which made some parts magically-invisible.
Needless to say, the game is a good start and should be developed further, as there are many rooms for improvement :)