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Thanks! The timestamps don't have any reference at all other than to themselves. I was only using them to try and tie the first and last passage together and the rest of the story is a fairly linear timeline. Travel thru space 'memberin' -> Oh no spaceship attack everybody escapepods! -> crash and we better defend ourselves ->good thing we defended ourselves oh no cap! -> I'mma get them bots is every passage inbetween the first and last. But absolutely confusing, there has to be a better way!

Thanks! watch you'll hear it every day for a month now! Your story was great, unique spin on ratfolk

Heck yeah! Thank you, especially liked the imagery in yours!

Thanks! Really digged your story as well!

Thanks, that haiku was a last minute addition! Truthfully, there was only one motivation for the captain but I should have maybe made it clearer

Thank you! The timestamps were strange. I only wanted to use them to denote the passage of time as compared to other timestamps, and to make sure the first section and final section were literally linked as they happen moments apart.

Thanks! I tried to stay away from that since it was being told by a drone at some point later but I'll definitely try to incorporate that into future stories!

Thanks, did you like the line disconcerting peace or in the wise execution of his parents? Really liked yours as well!

Would you believe it was intentional? But yes, 27 times is way too much I agree 100%

Thanks, I really likes yours as well!