There was one area I couldn't figure out around ending nine. It asks for a password. I couldn't figure that one out and just clicked exit. I was able to figure out the other password though.
Your audio design is very, very good; everything from the music on the title screen, to the voice acting, to the sound effects in the stairwell. It's well done.
You don't get enough credit for this game. It's really good. I ended up finding it by accident after playing Melissa and Morris. You're ability to create emotional characters is very, very good.
I did a narrated play through of the spooky version. I really liked the winter atmosphere. I thought you were going to sneak in a cat text picture of Stevens when they were texting about the neighbor's cat.