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a roller-coaster i wanna get on again and again.

wow. blew my mind completely. i was on the dge of my seat-the ebb and flow of tension between the two markswomen, their dialogue, the visual direction--10/10.

i LOVED the worldbuilding and how you didnt give everything away, and really let the reader fill in the gaps. i loved that we were plonked right into the middle of the action and it was guns blazing. fabulous. i was rooting for the two of them! the intense emotions, the love the hate... the way you write relationships... i just love it lol

my bit of feedback would be to add a ctc prompt on the NVL sections. it's difficult to gauge where the dialogue stops and starts, and it threw me off at the beginning.

AND THE POST CREDITS SCENE.... WOW!!! argh just so so cool! that's how id sum it up!! easyxshot is cool!!! seriously havent stopped thinking about it since i finished it. amazing job, loved every second.

congrats on the steam release!!

i'm sorry for cúpla focal jumpscare!!! it's the scariest part about this whole game to be fair lol

Thanks so much for playing!! I'm happy you enjoyed it!

ty for reading!! >:3c

What a powerful story! Kudos for being able to tell such a emotional story with compelling characters. It's got the perfect mix of tension and drama, and has really touching moments as well.  This is definitely one I'll be thinking about for ages after.

This was an absolute blast to play through and I had a smile on my face the entire time! I /adored/ Clyde and Fennel, their banter was a delight to read.

all the transitions and effects! Wow!!! I'm so inspired to have more fun with my own coding/transitions now. This is such a wonderful game and I cannot wait to play the full version.

ah thank you so much for your comment and that you enjoyed this! ;w; it's been a delight to see people's reactions.

I'm happy you liked the toy scene - since it was the first scene to be written and my favorite as well!

The ending! It felt like a cardinal VN sin to cut it there - but when it calls for it, you have to end it.

Thanks again for taking the time to play, and look forward to more VNs in future!

Thank you for leaving such a kind comment ;w; I'm happy Claire's... teenage desperateness came off well! She's charming in her own way.

And yes, it does take place in Ireland!

I finished this last night, the story completely gripped me so I had to play it until the very end!

First of all, congratulations on making this. It's hard to make a game by yourself, but it clearly is a labor of love. Everything is so polished and unique. It's a joy to see how cohesive the whole game is. I loved the speechbubbles! I've never seen them before, and they added so much.

The story is fantastic. I was with Magda 100%, I even yelled at the screen a few times so she'd run away or not trust someone. The tension was superb, I was on my edge of my seat at the second assembly. Adored Nils, what a brilliant character! I hope the two end up happy together despite it all.

I didn't expect to go relive my school days - I had a similar time at school (though not as badly as poor Magda, poor pet). So the ending was cathartic in a way I wasn't expecting, the messiness and thrill of revenge Magda goes through is something my teen self would've loved.

Bad Faith is something I'll come back to again, the emotions and story are so tight. Here's to your continued success! can't wait to see what's next : )

An amazing resource! thank you so much for sharing :o)