I had an absolute blast reading through this, your writing is absolutely amazing. I was hooked just from the first few sentences. Unfortunately I ran into a small error where I couldn't proceed through the card game scene with Noose. When they say "Think it is high time we start." it only gives an error notif, and stops there. Regardless, still had a fun time, keep up the great work!
I've been anticipating this IF, and it's just as good as I hoped it'd be. Better in fact, the writing is beautifully done, and I am excited to keep up with this piece of work.
