Awesome VN, Are you still working on it?
GreyWarden81
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You're right about that, I'm not only captivated by the storylines of both Serenity and Last Human but also by how unique the characters personalities are as well. Fire's work is one of a kind, In Serenity its so difficult to pick a favourite girl, but if I had to choose It would be between Fade and Lena. But that's just my opinion.
Hey N2TheFire You shouldn't have to stop development just because one person decides that chapter 1 in Serenity isn't good enough. I personally thought it was EPIC. Serenity so far is Perfect, As for Last Human, I am also a Star Trek fan, So when Spock and Tuvok say "The needs of the many, Outweigh the needs of the few" That saying might have some standing here too. I think your work is Perfect and I don't care what anyone else says.
Game is looking awesome so far, i cant wait to start reading. Only thing is judging from the picture at the top of this page, MC has a well built body but some enormous cheekbones doesn't he. Still, it will not detract from the story itself. I'm a huge fan of N2TheFire's work and I'm not afraid to admit it.
I think Sybil is just too cute but is she ever going to overcome her shyness and make a pass at the MC because I already see her arguing with Lym in the conference room about doing jobs for the captain, and eventually Lym says OK you can help out. (I'm sensing room for some AWESOME threesome action lol). And then there's PIP, Now I have to say you did a great job with her and I'm loving her mysterious aura. Keep it up.