Interesting narrative dynamics and immersive BGM! While streaming through this Demo I did offer occasional commentary and input especially coming to the used background animations. The screen spinning was way too much from public pov as it purely caused me nauseating feels - as was previously mentioned among the warnings, however I found it truly unnecessary. While I understand the idea behind it, it may be re-elaborated much better for example with zoom in/out effects or spiralling stingers (as one that was already used in the demo). The graphic part does have potential per se - but needs a lot of adjustments to make the whole work so that the person experiencing the game will enjoy it instead of feeling sick, distracted or bothered. Best of luck with your game!
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