I really enjoyed the demo. It's well written and I like the art. The scene with the commoners was suitably anxiety-inducing, and even tho I rarely go for women, Aerona is (so far) my favorite. I really felt bad for her.
I love this story, I love the art, the mood, the tone, and most of all, the writing. The emphasis on the scents conjures a vivid and immersive narration. Some of the sentences were so eloquently crafted I just stopped to marvel at them, lol.
I wish the best of motivation for your whole team and thank you for your honesty and hard work! This is one of the best otome demos I've played for a good while, so keep up the good work. :3