Hopefully it got better towards the end- All in all I'm glad I started writing all of the stuff I didn't like at the start to learn a bit about writing and scene making, but I don't know if I'm good enough to write the actual plot yet. Be sure to let me know when the next update drops if the pacing gets better or not as it's supposed to answer most of the stuff you talk about on your post!
I think the scene quality is good enough as is, but I need more feedback on the English dialogue side, so thank you so much for the review!