Thanks for reading it! I wish I could've submitted it to the jam but I ended up throwing out 90% of the script at the last minute and that took me way over the deadline.
Really glad I went through all that though because it made me feel better about writing. Like, it's just a thing I can do and it doesn't have to be long and grand or perfect. Part of it was because I played through some short visual novels on itch (including your one called "Real monster"). Mine is super short and pretty amateur compared to those though lol.