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I just wanted to say I LOVE the foreshadowing in this. The thing with the crown, Calder finding Cole instead of Marrow, the (redacted) hiding as a (redacted) in the crowd, Artemi being worried being stripped of her status as well... I hope we get more info on Sidd's dad soon too. His genes are strong in his kid. After so many fvn dating sims, I'm just so glad to be reading just, a compelling story

Honestly, I'd argue non-m/m people should also read this. You can skip the nsfw stuff too. Plus, f/m on-screen scenes have been around forever, they can handle some risque m/m scenes if we can sit through those

Not to mention it's fairly linear and doesn't even seem to have routes like a dating game would. It's just a story and it's great

This is just another comment saying that this fvn is amazing and you should definitely read it. I came here from Temptation's Ballad back in the day and love both. Sissel is legit my fav character in all of fvns with Cole in TB being a close 3rd. 

Interesting that you downloaded this tbh. What was the reason? Also -14 is stupid since you gave a 5/5 despite the fact you don't like furry stuff.

Yeah, rereading was a good call. Might as well get it on my phone instead

Is it ok to simply continue reading from the next update after reading these revisions or start from the beginning again? After scrolling a bit and seeing Artemi's new art, maybe I'll just reread the whole thing. Don't really like that she's less fluffy tbh but hey, as long as she's still her naive, crackly self I don't mind.

Reading the synopsis and the comment under mine just pushed me to get this. Saw the name of this as a suggestion in a random Keith Ballard vid and thought I'd look it up. Glad I did, kinda excited, hope this holds up. That said, still gotta catch up on some others before reading this.

I've seen this pop up before, people have said nice things but I don't particularly like the setting so I never really gave this a chance. Yall think I should push through and get this? How indepth are the characters? I wanna see if other commenters think it's worth it (not scrolling down cause there will for sure be spoilers in something that has 11 builds already)

That good huh? I'm the same but with Tai. Waiting for Lukas too. ...Maybe I'll see how Diego's go

You were made to... go out and get~ her~

Oh that's nice. I absolutely love Sissel with all my heart but I need to know what's going on with coleslaw too.  Took a break after a fight scene too right? The suspense is killing meee

He might not feel like he deserves it but Sis deserves the world and then some.

I've been procrastinating reading sadly so Idk if my words hold any weight but even so... I feel like merging the routes would be best for both the story, your workload and mental health. It would also reduce the risk of the vn being on hiatus or worse so retention wouldn't dip. 

That being said, are you only streamlining the story moving forward or will the whole thing be streamlined? If it's the former (and you decide to merge), decide on a point/day/event to merge the routes and make it known that something has changed in the writing. It'd be slightly jarring if the writing style changes suddenly imo. If it's the latter, maybe put out  a version of the game with what's already been done as an extra download so that people can go back to it.

Also, haven't really commented since early in the first build iirc so I wanna say that I've been enjoying the story a lot. Keep at it, I wanna see this to it's conclusion! (but please also take care of yourself obv)

Searching for the full name also didn't get me this VN. Once I searched "oihs" instead of "only I have skills" then this popped up.

GigaSaddle: "Pervader is a one-man effort, so I apologize if the updates don't come fast enough."

Some people: "I'll pretend I didn't see that"

it's not like people have other obligations and motivations, pfft, that can't be right?

Sounds very plausible. As much as Vulgor is grumpy, he still at least liked Caelan enough to give him a coin. All the other wolves wishes

On Tai's route (not caught up) and can I just say, out of personal experience, fuck Diego. Got me reliving bad memories. Other than that, just picked this up the other day and loving the story and characters. Considering stopping where I'm at just so I can get the foul taste out of my mouth and continue when it's all done just so I don't get blueballed

If anyone is debating whether or not to read this, please do. All I can say are I hope this gets the success it deserves and I really wish I found it sooner. 

Ikr? The amount of times I've just had the vn on just to have the main theme play is unreal

Absolutely been loving the story so far. My only gripes are that the music abruptly stops sometimes instead of being gradually slowed down (ok for certain parts though) and the loops of it isn't as smooth as I'd like to be. By no means am I an expert on the topic but I just figured I'd give my opinion on that.

All 3 of the guys are endearing in their own way and I always have to really think about what my main route would be. Oscar best boi don't @ me but Lucas is just so adorable. Not as interested in Leigh but I'm sure that if I bothered to get to know him more I'd love him as much as the other two.

If the quality of this keeps up then it'd sure get people talking like some of the other VNs around. 

Edit: Forgot to mention that I love that we're playing as Wallace and not as ourselves. We don't need to literally be in the story to be invested. Honestly not throwing shade on other stories that let us do it however

Do I eat or do I get an Amicus figure? Hmmm...

I really want to read Khemia ASAP but idk if I can handle waiting for a new chapter. Adastra was such an amazing vn that I just need m o a r