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Hmm, perhaps keeping in theme with Sleeping Sister somewhat, perhaps a daily life type of game like My Oblivious Milf, where you do perverted things to your family, like groping your mother whilst she's cooking breakfast, cumming in your sister's morning coffee, using your aunt's panties as jerk material, peeping on your cousin showering, etc.
this way you can have more variety, rather than just sleeping situations, heck, you can possibly even incorporate Sleeping Sister as part of the game, using the sleep mechanic. Perhaps a day cycle mechanic, maybe not as varied as MOM, perhaps Morning, Noon, Evening and Night will be just fine.
I linked this post on reddit's r/lewdgames and r/NSFWgaming as well, hopefully you get more responses and players,
I quite liked Sleeping Sister.
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Sleeping sister was really good, great mechanics and progression.
Not sure what else I'd like them to make, but while I enjoy some text based games my favourites usually have images. Even just some form of stock images would help. May not be possible with the developers situation but if they could find a way that would be great.
Maybe the next game could include moving around the house and having other interactions and dialogue, more characters to interact with. Combine that with the a similar sex mechanic.
Ah, i didn't realise that. either it wasn't made clear or i was too immersed in the story to realise that there was a gallery.
btw, great music choices. i usually never have the music turned on for erotic games, but i love the soundtrack you've used for the game.
i would name specific moments, but then i'd be spoiling things for other players, so instead i'll just say, the songs with vocals are great.
I'm playing through Deviant Anomalies right now, i just came across a scene that referenced this game, the scene was about the mc looking down an alley to see a naked man squatting next to a huge black dildo whilst on the ground was a comic version of once in a lifetime, similar to how you can find a random guy sitting across from a huge dildo in this game during the train scene. man i love the humour in Once in a Lifetime and can't wait for version 1.0 to come out, i'm considering getting a small patreon membership just to get the game a couple days earlier than the public release.
man, i was just going back through my first review, and comparing v0.7 to v0.8 and v0.9, i can see that you've made many improvements on the issues that i had with v0.7, and seeing a developer actively taking on criticism and working to improve their game for their audience is wonderful thing to see.
Man, v0.9 was awesome. it isn't as long as v0.8, but it had plenty of story content.
(START OF MINOR SIDE-STORY SPOILER)
Man, Oliver's dilemma was a hysterical moment that had me chuckling to myself.
And Fit Jack's chemistry with the unnamed classmate is extraordinary, she's evolved from thot to obsessed stalker, i'd love to see if their relationship goes anywhere, especially when she inevitably becomes fit herself from chasing Fit Jack all the time.
(END OF MINOR SIDE-STORY SPOILER)
And bro, your cliffhanger's keep making me want more, every cliffhanger in the past 2-3 versions have been awesome, and have had me waiting in anticipation for the next updates.
And after the set-up and twists in v0.9, making it seem like v1.0 is going to be the final chapter, i can't wait for v1.0 to come out and see the finale to this epic of a story-based porn game.
As always, great work Caribdis. your work is amazing, and if you do make another game after OiaL, i'll make sure to play through it as well and try to give the most constructive reviews that i can.
Great game as always, i haven't played since the 0.7 release and replaying it again still makes me enjoy the game.
i get to re-experience some of the funniest scenes in porn game history
like the "Will to Live" scene or the "Begone Thot" scene
as well as that new scene with Tom in v0.8.
Keep up the good work man, if i wasn't strapped for cash, i'd go on your patreon and get myself either the supporter or master tier to unlock v0.9.
can't wait for it's public release.
probably cuz i'm a filthy casual playing on a laptop, but the game keeps crashing on me, especially during the tutorial, when i'm adding an npc or relative and sex scenes. is there any way to lower the quality of the game just so it can run without crashing?
also, is there any tutorial after the sex scene tutorial, cuz i literally cannot get past the sex scene and don't know if there's anything else i should know.