Hello hello ! I would like to give a little comment about what I see currently. ( I even invited u discord in case you want some advice :D )
Well... I'm not going to lie, it's not very good ~
Even for an initial release, let me explain :
The scenario is... pretty empty, it's total rush, the meeting with the fairy well... okay yeah... It lacks development.
It lacks a logical/coherent or even basic dialogue in my opinion !
For character, there is not a really good introduction of them, we lack, as player, some information to get right into your story.
In short, it lacks development.
I'm not going to judge the characters, but using a BASE character is really not cool to see, especially for players who have already done a lot of VN Koikatsu.
Courage for the development of this game, don't hesitate if you need some advice ! But I know you can do better than that ! :D